Hello and welcome back to my blog today I will be shearing with you my writing task from this week my goal was Use a range of written features to engage the audience.
did you think I did a good jod fixing the sentences?
Thursday, May 28, 2020
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Hello Hannah,
ReplyDeleteI really like the changes you made to the sentences, especially to the first one. I also liked the way you used colours to highlight adjectives, nouns, verbs etc. Maybe next time you could work on connecting sentences more seeing as you didn't do that much in this create task.
From Gianna