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Monday, June 26, 2017

My writing

This is a piece of writing I have been working on in writing time for show not tell

 My lion adventure
I had to leave the building so suddenly that I only had time to grab my book. Then I sprinted out of the building. The reason I had to get out so fast was because there were ferocious lions chasing me. I stopped to rest because I had bean running for days. So I was exhausted and I needed food and water. I guzzled  down a bottle of water as first as the lions chased me. Then I sprinted on and just then I turned around a corner and there was a meadow where no lions could go


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