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Friday, September 8, 2017

collaborative writing

This is some of my collaborative writing with Isabella
The jungle
“Help” screamed the candy kitten  she was terrified and the popcorn puppy was jumping up and down and yapping in fear which was no help to candy how was just getting more scared and annoyed that hear bright pink cot was getting dirty and hear light pink nails were getting chipped un lick popcorn's white cot with caramel streaks through it and clear nails.
“Do you hear that “the lemon leaped “what” said the cherry chatear “the screaming said the lennon leopard.  “O” sead the cherry chatter “that sound”.  

“Help” said the popcorn puppy.  Her vose echoed through the shouted forest which was just as well. because the rain was pouring down as fast as cherry cheater sprintede
But soon the vose reached the 2 friends and they had the most wicked idear. Lets help them said the cherry cheater her green  eyes sparkling with mischief her sleek golden cot with black spots soaking wet with water because they were in a clearing dark brown branches with green leaves were reaching out to them and scraping at there for whenever they got to close. cherry cheater was very different to hear frend lemon leopard how had light brown eyes light brown with black and gould splotches on her cot but her cot was also soaking wet.

ok we’ll help but only if they do something for us said the lemon leopard maybe we should just see what they want said the cherry cheater so then the cherry cheater and the lemon leopard sprinted off into the jungle they had a race the cherry cheater won of course everyone knows cheaters are faster than leopards.

Look gasped popcorn what said candy over there in the trees it looks like to carnivores sprinting towards us.


When cherry and lemon reached the tow shaking friends that sent them on the wrong path on purpose to a bers cottage when the bar saw them she opened her mouth and...

I hope you enjoy go check out Isabella's blog she will soon also have this up on her blog.

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